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Tuesday, September 13, 2005

વરસાદ પછી -લાભશંકર ઠાકર

જ લ  ભીં જે લી
જો બ  ન  વં તી
લથબથ ધરતી
અં ગ અં ગ  થી
ટપકે      છે    કૈં
રૂપ    મનોહર !
ને      તડકાનો
ટુવાલ    ધોળો
ફરી    રહ્યો   છે
ધીમે       ધીમે;
યથા    રાધિકા
જમુનાજલ માં
સ્નાન    કરીને
પ્ર સ ન્ન તા થી
રૂપ    ટપકતા
પારસ  -   દેહે
વસન    ફેરવે
ધીરે      ધીરે !

જોઈ   રહ્યો છે
પરમ   રૂપના
ઘૂંટ     ભરંતો
શું મુજ શ્યામલ
નેનન    માંહે
છુપાઈને  એ
કૃષ્ણકનૈયો ?

- લાભશંકર ઠાકર

2 Comments:

At 9/13/2005 01:56:36 PM, પ્રત્યાયન said...

Nice poem of La. Tha. Repetition of ‘Ga-Ga’….Very poetic.
In literature, critics evaluate this sort of poems as highly cretive.
The only thing what I don’t understand is the relation of Krisha-Radha. It was more like a ‘sakha-sakhi’ love without gender and its natural attractions.

The Vallabh Sampryaday and its 'Shrungar' based sogns have distorted this relation a lot !

Those who are interested to see detaild analysis of this relation please refer Osho Rajneesh’s: Krishna Meri Dristi Se’

 
At 9/13/2005 05:13:19 PM, narmad said...

Again, I can't agree more.

This kind of poems you just sit back and enjoy. I just read it to myself few times and let the meaning dawn on its own !

It is, in Niranjan Bhagat's words, "kaan thi vanchvaani kavitaa".

 

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